Tuesday, 12 May 2020

Writing

The Sly Old Fox Once upon a time, there was a little old lady that went shopping. When she got back she got a ring from her granddaughter that she was coming over but the sly old fox overheard her and snuck inside then swallowed the little old lady whole. 

Then the fox disguised himself as the little old lady! When the little girl got there she was gulped up too! Then the woodchopper man and the coal miner man got there to drop off the coal and wood, when they knocked on the door there was no answer. So they went inside and lit the fire for her. 

 They were just about to leave when they heard a big, loud THUD!! It was from her room so they went to have a look. Then they found her lying in her bed. When they got outside the woodchopper man said: “Hay she’s got a big mouth”. 

 Then they ran inside and killed the fox, chopped him open and they got them out. When they left they had fox for dinner. When the little girl got home she told her parents what she had been through that day. 

 THE END

2 comments:

  1. I enjoyed reading your story. I like how you changed it from a wolf to a fox.

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  2. Kia ora my name is Taliya I`m from Matawai School.
    Kei te pehea koe?
    I like the photo.I like the slippers with the bunny on them. I like the sign when it said home sweet home.Do you like the movie?

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